"Where common memory is lacking, where people do not share in the same past, there can be no real community. Where community is to be formed, common memory must be created."

- Georges Erasmus, Dene Elder. -


Manuscript title: a Planet on a Hill

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Synopsis

Since the dawn of time, Earth has shared its orbit around the sun with a second planet; a green and blue planet named Orda that appears in the sky like a marble held at arm’s length. Orda has forever captured Man's imagination but exceeded its grasp.


In an alternate 1965, The Beatles are an English band comprised of three men and two women. Che Guevara is President of Argentina, Dr Martin Luther King Jr. has been assassinated, and deeply ordinary 26-year-old FORD MONROE lives the life he loves: quiet, unassuming, and at a safe distance from the many social issues that rock the 1960s.


That is, until a message in a bottle from Earth’s neighbouring planet, Orda, crashes down in Ford’s garden, designating him and fifty-nine other residents of his Welsh town as ambassadors of mankind. Worse still, the message proposes a first-ever meeting, mid-way between Earth and Orda, one year from the day. The whole world grinds to a halt and all the nations of Earth unite

to construct a vessel capable of flying these sixty randomly sampled men, women, and children up to space and back again.


Ford is forced to abandon his simple life for a detainment camp where he and his townspeople are to be prepared for their grand voyage. Most of the sixty look at Orda with dread and decry their lot. Yet others rejoice and are eager to impose mankind’s exceptionalism on whatever beings from Orda they’re bound to meet. Despite his efforts to remain a bystander, Ford soon

finds himself grafted into this group of unlikely friends of mixed age and ethnicity. Confronted with the disconnect between him and the world around him, Ford wrestles with the expectations put on him as a representative of mankind.


Meanwhile, many miles away, ELLE DAVIS, a black, social activist and schoolteacher, is contacted by a pair of penniless pensioners, MR. and MRS. ABBOTT, and their friend, NORM. The eccentric trio has devised a hair-brained scheme to sabotage the rocket’s launch. Though she opposes their religious motivations, Elle agrees to their plan, gravely concerned about the lives

of the children bound for space. Under cover of darkness, Elle and the trio infiltrate the detainment camp using homemade hot-air

balloons. Unfortunately, their plan goes awry; the Abbotts are killed and their supplies lost. Elle and Norm have no choice but to avoid detection by hiding in an old freight container. Days become weeks. Soon all the work of finding food and coming up with an alternative plan is left to Elle as Norm, now helpless due to trauma and grief, slips into a depression.


All the while, by virtue of his friend’s anecdotes on civil rights, childhood trauma, and domestic abuse, Ford's inner world grows increasingly colourful and complex. His quietness and simple kindness endear him to the camp’s children, especially NEIL, a boy with special needs. Through Neil, Ford learns that his own strength lies not in heroic leadership, but in staying on the sidelines, close to people on the margins whose needs in the camp are often overlooked.


Launch day dawns. The rocket, a giant oval on legs that looks as if it was taken straight from an old comic, is ready for launch. Singing, praying, cussing and kicking; mankind’s ambassadors are herded aboard. Through sheer determination and steadfastness to nonviolence, Elle manages to reach the foot of the vessel with minutes to spare. It is at this moment that, with victory all but certain, she realises that she’s made a grave error. She’s forgotten to carry with her a tool essential to her plan’s success. Elle crumbles; all her efforts have been for naught. The rocket cannot be stopped.


Everyone on Earth watches excitedly as the hastily made rocket launches into space. The flight, however, soon devolves into chaos. Although the rockets from Earth and Orda successfully dock; the door to the sky-bridge connecting them appears inoperable. The rockets start to twist and turn. Bolts begin popping from the walls, and the fuselage starts to buckle. Fights break out between those who want to abort the mission and those who want to press on. Everyone’s life hangs by a thread and disaster is certain until Ford’s little friend, Neil, surreptitiously wriggles himself through a hole in the wall and reaches the sky-bridge to manually uncouple the ships. As Neil struggles to move the lever that will save everyone, Elle appears, dishevelled and exhausted,

having stowed herself aboard at the last possible moment. She helps Neil uncouple the ships before going back into hiding. Neil, the most unreliable witness of all, is the only one to ever see her.


Ford and his friends safely return to Earth where they, despite the failed mission, are welcomed as heroes. They remain very close friends and go on to enjoy many caravan holidays in Spain. For her actions, Elle is sent to prison. During her imprisonment, she establishes the country’s first young offenders education program. Twenty years later, Elle receives a full pardon. Her likeness appears on the twenty-pound note.

Preview

According to the fourteenth edition of The Encyclopaedia Britannica from 1965, The Beatles are an English rock band comprised of three men and two woman; often regarded as one of the most influential bands of the fifties and sixties. The world’s first same-sex marriage law was passed by the Scottish Parliament in 1878. In 1955, Rosa Parks was arrested for refusing to give up her bus seat to a white man. Dr Martin Luther King Jr was shot and killed in 1965. Rocketships do not exist and man has never been to space. 

Orda, Earth's nearest neighbour, is described as follows: 

The planet Orda is a member of the Solar system, at equal distance from the Sun as Earth and seemingly of equal size. In the wider sense, it may be regarded as composed of an atmosphere, which encircles a variety of geographical features and surface waters. The rotation of Orda appears to be perfectly uniform and has, similar to Earth, two principal motions: a yearly revolution about the Sun and a daily rotation about its axis from west to east. The planet Orda is on the same elliptical orbit as Earth and leads by two and a half days. The size of a pea held at arm’s length, it is most easily seen at dusk and dawn and can appear bright, bluish, white and green, half lit and half in shadow. 

"At ten past eight on Saturday morning, the twenty-second of May, 1965 the greatest moment in the history of the world announced itself with a very short, high-pitched -beep-."

"With a suddenness that startled all the listeners, a sound like that of a drum falling from a great height boomed from radios in Bunting and beyond. Far over Ford's garden and over Marlow Field it echoed on and on and on but, unlike thunder in the mountains, it did not roll into silence but abruptly resounded again and again and again."

"His father grabbed the object with both hands. 'Well then unstuck it,’ he cried and together they pulled and pushed but try as they might, the object on Ford’s arm would not come off and no amount of prying and prodding did anything to loosen it."

"We have discovered that, enciphered within the objects was a communique: an invitation to meet, one year from today, midway between our two planets. By means of Orda's invitation, sixty people have been bound to fulfil that meeting as ambassadors of mankind. Sixty people and sixty people only. They have already been selected and are currently being prepared for their grand voyage."

"Ford had simply never been a part of anything, really. He’d never joined a club, wasn’t in a band, didn’t play sports and hardly ever went to the pub. Once he’d been to a concert but he’d left early on account of it being too noisy. He’d never joined a political party or religion and he’d certainly never joined an expedition into space. Surely, soon the powers that be would realise he shouldn’t be involved and he’d be sent home, to read about the rocket launch like everyone else— if there was even going to be a rocket launch at all."

"Meanwhile, many miles away, an elderly couple put their game of dominos on pause to put to paper an idea, more absurd and more ambitious than could ever be dreamed, that would throw a mighty big spanner in the works of history."

"Though her stories were some of the most bizarre he’d ever heard—she had once found two dozen bobby pins in a hairdresser’s stomach—Ford slowly felt his desire to be alone ebb away. Ms Albright spoke as if they were not in some great trouble. Only yesterday they’d been told they’d be detained for a year, after which they’d be put into a rocket, which had yet to be built, and shot up into space to represent mankind to an alien race. Granted, even to Ford, who typically didn't question authority, that all sounded absurd. He'd probably misunderstood the Man on the TV. Then again, here he was: in a camp patrolled guards, which he was not permitted to leave, with a dome for a home, wearing an obscure bracelet and he'd just had breakfast with a coroner, who had a cat named Dennis in her freezer and a proclivity for telling stories about death."

"At that same moment, many miles away, a woman entered her classroom to find on her blackboard an envelope addressed to Elle Davis - Westfield Comprehensive, the content of which would ultimately save her life and those of many others."

"'Four people for what?' said Elle, doing her very best to prevent impatience from appearing in her voice.

Mr Abbott sat up and cleared his throat. 'Let me be as clear as can be. The purpose of our expedition is to thwart the Powers That Be from fulfilling their primary objective, that is, to construct a means to attain the altitude required for an extraterrestrial rendezvous between—’

'It’s simple,' interrupted Mrs Abbott, patting her husband’s knee. 'We’re going to sabotage the launch.’"

"Like a dragon the burner roared, the metres moved; all the dials were in the green. Fear and excitement grew in equal measure. Elle raised her head. She'd long ago made up her mind; she wouldn't be deterred. The only way forward was up, up into the darkness in three, two, one…"

"Hope, Elle had once read, was a memory of the future; the belief that things which once were true, would one day be true again. Elle had taken that quote to heart when first she’d read it; but now, alone, tired, sorrowful and afraid, it sounded like a lie. "

"The lights flickered. Thunder expanded into a deafening bellow. Everything shook and shuddered and clanged from little bolts to giant beams. The level of crying and wailing, cheering and shouting, cussing and praying rose beyond comprehension as the rocketship let out a dreadful roar. If not for the weight of some invisible elephant pressing him down in his seat Ford would've thought the earth itself had been torn apart and the ship was sliding down a bottomless pit. Instead, the ship was hurtling itself upwards, riding atop a thunderstorm; more noisy, more tumultuous, more overwhelmingly fearful than Ford could have ever imagined."

Manuscript title: the Planet on a Hill

Agent & Publisher: -querying-

*full publishing rights available. ISBN numbers reserved.